The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Some people agree, some others disagree. Discuss both view.
The majority of people claim that all forms of advertising should be ban based on the fact that it is not useful. However, I deem that the issue has both advantages and disadvantages.
it cannot be denied how beneficial advertising has brought to the world. Due to the information provided by the advertisements, more people will get a glimpse of newly launched products, and therefore, consumers will have different options, and can purchase the product which is best suit their interests. For example, many cars whose brands are diverse, have been advertised throughout some Thailand films. it can be seen that, not only the customers can consider between the variety of cars’ brands, but also those brands are benefit themselves. advertising is an effective way to promote products in business. If there is a law demanding the ban of all forms of such method, this will have a tremendous effect to the market.
Despite of such advantages, there are quite many negative effects complaint by customers when mentioned the surge in the quantities of advertisements. The overload of the information about upcoming product has been considered as disturbance to a huge number of audience. people feel uncomfortable while being interrupted in the middle of watching their favorite show. Bombarding people with thousand of advertising is another reason made citizens dislike advertisements. Instead of receiving news about new line of product, audiences are surrounded by a matrix of attractive endorsements consist of stunning effects, extraordinary picture, and exaggerated contents. Because of such, many citizens have a tendency of purchasing unnecessary commodities, hence, banning all kinds of advertisements seems to be a potential solution for the problems.
In conclude, to some certain extent, I deem that advertising play an important role in the society that merely bar us from forbidding it totally, though the government shall have a solution in controlling the amount of advertisements appears when broadcasting or leaflets on the street.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'banned'?
Suggestion: banned
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Suggestion: a thousand
...r favorite show. Bombarding people with thousand of advertising is another reason made c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44236760125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1868595507 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2314370964 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223192306816 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067664688465 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520714775503 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137955659903 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367730933957 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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