In some countries around the world, men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, in a number of nations, especially in developed ones, people have a tendency to give birth later in their life to further their education and career path. While this trend may bring certain benefits, I believe that these benefits are eclipsed by potential disadvantages to the babies and the society.
That many couples refuse to have babies until they are older may be because of the development of technology, making it possible for people to give birth at all ages. For example, thanks to the introduction of IVF treatment facilities, women can have babies at the age of 40, giving them more time to focus on their career. Moreover, this helps parents0 to be well prepared financially and emotionally before having children. It is because after giving birth to a child, parents have to face more challenges including extra expenses and household chores, which may overwhelm those who do not have stable economic and emotional status. Therefore, gaining financial stability and parental experience before giving birth will allow the parents the ability to provide their kids with the best care and education.
However, this benefit can be outweighed by its harms to both pregnant women and the born kids. This is becase women who get pregnant when being older are slightly more likely to come down with gestational diabetes and high blood pressure, and there is a little higher risk of the child being born prematurely and even having chromosomal abnormalities. In addition, this trend may also affect the economic prosperity of a country because when senior generation retire, there will be not enough young people to replace their positions. As a result, there is a possible lack of employees, which may suppress the development of a nation economically.
To conclude, due to giving priority to careers and having modern technology, people can now have babies later in life, which helps them to take better care of their children. However, I believe that this will cause children’s suffering from potential physical deformities and a shortage of workforce for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12865497076 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7092059465 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1235151969 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135614976688 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501556728733 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347135772057 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850267853868 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113395083841 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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