In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
A recently published study has illustrated that the average weight of people is rising and it has significantly lowered their health and fitness level.This essay considers sedentary life style and evolving eating habits the causative factors of this problem.It can be managed by raising awareness and by building more sports facilities.
Technological advances have negatively impacted our lifestyles. People are now for most part of the day on their office desks or in front of their computer screens, which deteriorates their physical well being by making overweight because of negligible physical activity.As an illustration, result of a scientific study showed that 40% of workers in corporate sector are overweight while 6% are obese.
The shift in eating practices have also affected health badly.People are opting for fast foods and fried items rather than fresh vegetables and dairy products, as a result of which their weight increases and their fitness level declines.For instance, A search study showed that most of the ingredients of fast food are artificially synthesised and can cause obesity also can result in chronic diseases like diabetes.
These growing problems of over weighing and lowering health status can be addressed by making people understand the causes of them and by educating people regarding their solutions and prevention. This is exemplified by a compaign launched in New Delhi India that educate office workers and urge them to exercise regularly.
Governments can also provide solution by encouraging people to exercise by building facilities like jogging tracks, sport complexes, and gymnasia etc.For example 114 sports grounds of different scale recently built by government of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa are used by 0.5 million people every month.
In conclusion, in general the average weight of the people are on the rise, affecting their health.This essay believes that sedentary living patterns and bad eating habits are mainly responsible for this.This can be coped affectively by elevating the level of knowledge about this issue and by providing people with more facilities to exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54434250765 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8679700609 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.78995764 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.625 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.875 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222553560124 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969330319033 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715143206391 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11681020286 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051401822587 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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