In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
For some people in many nations, when it is time for job seeking, they have to live away from their beloved ones like families and friends. They may find this has not only good points but also drawbacks. In my opinion, the first one outweighs the other.
The primary disadvantages of living away from families and friends for work are homesickness and culture shock. Homesickness is something people may expect as they are at first far away from their close ones, who they have known for ages, and stay with strangers, who they have just met, knowing nothing other than names. Moreover, people can get culture shock if they have to move to another country where have differences from their home in living styles, behaviors and so on.
However, going far away for work has remarkable advantages. The first one is building people's independence. When people move away from their home, they need to live on their own. This means there will be no one near them to help solve their problems. For instance, instead of a hot meal prepared by your mother after a tiring workday, you need to learn how to cook for yourself, which is unfamiliar to some people. The second point to be named is the chance for exploration. When people move to a new place, they will meet new people, new lifestyles, etc. Some may bring unwanted experiences, but some will bring wonderful ones. For example, when people move to big cities like New York, they will experience a life full of night activities.
In conclusion, moving away for work may have some drawbacks at first like culture shock and homesickness, but it has numerous good points, which outweigh them. People should take working away from home into account for their independent development and the opportunity for exploration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84488448845 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50957060988 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1730965494 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411233863367 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13309217483 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994634529177 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268861097024 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044867969193 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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