In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most people nowadays hold a similar view that the consumption of too much junk and processed food can be affected health issues. I support the problem and strongly agree that governments should impose heavy fax on this kind of product. In conclusion, the following paragraph discusses both statements and gives the reasonable reason
Eating fast food has become a more favorable hobby for a large of young people in some countries and they are face to face with health problems like getting obese, overweight,… The first reason is that fast meals are packed in beautiful, sparkling boxes and have an affordable price. For instance, almost unhealthy snacks look diverse and abundant from color to food taste, that's why they are very stimulating for the younger generation. Nowadays, there are a lot of online food delivery applications; therefore, it's so convenient and easy to order home deliveries. On the whole, this problem needs to give the best solution and be thoroughly solved before becomes more serious.
So what do we have to do to fix this situation? Nowadays, to reduce the consumption of junk food, governments need to take measures to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Suppose that if the chain of snack restaurants have open only in the morning, it will limit the fast food. Moreover, eating more unhealthy snacks will lead to dangerous diseases such as high blood pressure, heart disease,...For example, the figure of people hospitalized has increased significantly compared to previous years.
In conclusion, the imposition of authorities can be encouraged citizens that should boost healthy food than unhealthy snacks. That's also a way to solve this problem and I agree entirely with this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17375886525 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82286654385 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0857572365 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369008437526 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117379520619 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634673903572 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198291630209 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546369803552 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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