In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there has been a rapid increase in the risk of health problems associated with those consuming junk food, which causes the Government to implement a much higher levy on this kind of food. To my knowledge, it is for that this policy should be proposed strictly on its consumers and production companies.
Firstly, the rising price of convenience food will lead people not to be able to afford it. Fast food is known as a low priced quick served dish in a few minutes, which people are capable of buying them directly on their way to work or schooling. That noticeably contributes to the consumption rise of this kind of food in some countries. According to that fact, the Government’s setting an increasing tax policy on junk food will cause people to have a financial burden on the affordability to fast food, which gradually declines their expenditure. For example, after having been imposed an increasingly higher rate of tax, the amount of consumption of cigarettes and drugs in some developed countries, such as the US, significantly dropped.
Secondly, fast food companies have to hold responsible for what they are producing and bringing on the market. Nowadays, it is the case that some businesses have just been chasing profit without being aware of customers’ hygiene safety. They imported and used the expired and unfresh ingredients to make dishes, and almost all junk food is deep-fried or availably prepared, hardly people could know how its actual quality is. As a result, more and more policies and laws have recently been proposed to protect consumers’ health, and force all convenience food companies to take the responsibilities for making healthy food or an amount of money will be paid.
In conclusion, fast food should be taxed at a greater rate because the higher the price rises, the less consumption the citizens have. Also, the higher tax will force food companies to generate products with healthy fresh ingredients for consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06134969325 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84863478926 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6914839618 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326191953401 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123374695483 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063701771251 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206948447167 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471253130819 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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