In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, more and more people have chosen to live alone, especially in developed countries. Although this trend has brought both positive and negative development, I think the negative effects are a little bit more dominant.
For several reasons, living alone has some undeniable benefits in many aspects. Firstly, people choosing solitary lives have to learn many basic skills to maintain their lives normally which will result in enhancing self-dependence. Moreover, not receiving some support from family has forced them to be responsible for their living costs, leading to an upgrade in the ability of financial management as well as a sense of responsibility. Secondly, an element of happy life that many people have been pursuing, freedom or ultimate privacy, can be achieved if you live alone so you can do anything you like, spend your time leveling up yourself without being mindful about someone else. In the broader sense, this lifestyle may play an important role in encouraging the country's economy by reinforcing businesses depriving profit from offering products or services for homeowners.
On the other hand, living alone may have some drawbacks. Besides the freedom, people who are far away from their family will feel loneliness and are more likely to experience many philosophical mental problems such as depression, stress or anxiety. The reason causing these problems is that they have no one to share their difficulties and worries everyday like when they lived with family and received appeasement whenever they are tired. The responsibility for paying all daily bills without or just a little bit of financial support is also a catalyst making the philosophical mental problems more horrendous. The trend of increasing single-person families is causing waste leading to many negative effects on the environment.. For example, four members of a family living together in one apartment will consume extremely less power than the total power consumption if they live separately in four apartments.
In conclusion, the number of single-families is increasing these days and it has some positive aspects despite many severe negative consequences.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Suggestion:
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...aying all daily bills without or just a little bit of financial support is also a catalyst...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...phical mental problems more horrendous. The trend of increasing single-person famil...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...many negative effects on the environment.. For example, four members of a family l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42352941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92089477688 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1861847592 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344281546215 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111749413367 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618706780568 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203203571589 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670448436697 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ent, I think the negative effects are a little bit more dominant. For several reasons,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Secondly, an element of happy life that many people have been pursuing, freedom ...
^^
Line 3, column 882, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng products or services for homeowners. On the other hand, living alone may have...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...aying all daily bills without or just a little bit of financial support is also a catalyst...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...phical mental problems more horrendous. The trend of increasing single-person famil...
^^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...many negative effects on the environment.. For example, four members of a family l...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42352941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92089477688 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1861847592 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344281546215 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111749413367 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618706780568 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203203571589 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670448436697 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.