More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There is a trend that people have a tendency to purchase products from well-known brands. While I subscribe to the opinion that this development is positive, I believe that it exerts adverse impacts on society. My essay also will shed light on causes of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it stands to reason that there are manifold reasons why people show their inclination to items from famous brands. Firstly, famous brands usually have superior products that an array of former consumers have a high opinion of. Thanks to high-quality products, the good reputation of those brands is built and this gives people a sense of guarantee and pleasure. Secondly, well-known brands put a large sum of money into advertisements in order to make sure that customers could pay heed to their products. As a result, people have a chance to get access to those products and easily make a good shopping decision.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that buying famous brands’ products also has several drawbacks. First, the bulk of famous brands items are luxury and expensive, so some individuals want to catch up with this trend so as to show themselves to other counterparts. As a consequence, they will squander their money on unnecessary things and encounter financial adversities. Furthermore, in many countries especially developing countries where the demand for famous brands’ products is high, bad sellers might take advantage of this in order to produce fake luxury brands items. Thus, it will pose a threat to the market and the development of the national economy.
In conclusion, there are several explanations for buying famous brands’ items. While I suppose that advantages of this trend are obvious, it is my contention that it also gives rise to negative consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...iduals want to catch up with this trend so as to show themselves to other counterparts. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83001373508 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8414823004 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203122144714 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654207086151 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529221475394 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113808213166 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522210567001 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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