Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
It is believed that human smartness is expressed through achievement and prosperity. However, others think that there are some other methods to indicate the intelligence quotient of a person. From my point of view, despite the reflection of brilliance to success, I maintain that it depends on a multiple of factors.
On the one hand, the ability to deal with challenges and acquire knowledge are valuable indicators of understanding. First of all, it is undeniable that a clever person is always the fastest to find out problems. Indeed, people often get confused when they get a trouble but they do not spend a lot of time researching it. Therefore, a smart brain can urge people to cope with situations in the fastest way. Furthermore, brilliance is measured through the way learners achieve information. For example, according to a study conducted at a university in Vietnam, most of the intelligent students are able to absorb a new language quicker than others.
On the other hand, not all successful people are clever. In fact, besides intellectual factor, the advancement is indispensable without hard work and resilience as well as effective adaptation to different situations. For instance, if scientists did not make great efforts, they would not come up with achievements. In some cases, the intelligent can not succeed on account of the lack of opportunities and support. Thus, success is absolutely not the most effective standard to determine intelligence quotient.
In conclusion, the progress of a person confides a lot in diligence and flexibility without cleverness. Additionally, intelligence can be tested by the superior capacity to face challenges and knowledge acquisition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the progress of a person confides a lot in diligence and flexibility without cle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33085501859 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22087156312 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7827461687 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288674821685 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794019829236 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892962675184 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152123706654 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470574749801 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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