In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In certain countries, it is more important for people to possess their house instead for renting. There may be some reason lead to this condition, but in my opinion, it is a negative circumstance in our daily life.
There may be three main points can explain this viewpoint. Firstly, owning your house may be the real estate manufacturer advertisements, they want to earn money and propagandize the house. Secondly, in Chinese’s traditional point: fallen leaves return to the route which is the house you have. People lice some countries will affect by the custom culture. Thirdly, the right of the house is unstable if you rent, so many people think that buy the house will own the all rights of the house and will not sorry about the permission.
May be own your house is important, but there are some negative effects will occur. Firstly, people need to spend a lot of money to purchase one house which will be in debt and it can decrease their living well-being. Secondly, due to build many houses, it will damage our environment which many manufacturer free development of land. At last but not least, there may be waste resources because some places are occupied by the unfinish buildings that people can not be developed for other purposes.
In my opinion, have our own house is important, but we need to think about our ability and requirement that choose the suitable way to live instead of blinding buy house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...u have. People lice some countries will affect by the custom culture. Thirdly, the right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79268292683 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61001252444 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5213827926 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218951803754 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883314709016 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460185364175 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136929894204 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601276070792 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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