In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Why might this be the case?

Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

These days, it is supposedly assumed that purchasing a house instead of spending money on a rental one plays a crucial part in our life. There must be some implicit reasons for this, which makes me consider it as a completely brilliant idea.

The question of why this is so pivotal obtains a number of answers. The prime reason for this is the feeling of ownership in the interior landscapes of human beings, which purports that each of us desires to earn some particular things regarded as our real estate. For instance, if the host wants to decorate the house with colorful ornaments, it is not requisite to enquire for anyone's permission. In addition, they can show their responsibilities with their own beloved house. In contrast, in the condition that they are renting a house, it is out of the question for them to take care of it conscientiously on grounds that seemingly it is not their duty to do that and when the house attains no care, it will become a mess.

From my perspective, having a house on my own company does tremendous wonders for me. Whenever feeling down in the dumps and frustrated with this dog-eat-dog society, as well as the vicissitudes in my life, a familiar home is the most splendid place offering a cozy vibe and huge incentive to continue endeavoring to overcome those. For example, as suffering from an extremely heavy workload either at school or at the office, heading back to my own home to lounge on the couch letting my hair down can alleviate stress and pressure from the hardships.

All in all, not only does owning a house provide us with a residing place but also reinforce our spiritual lives exceedingly more than what a rental one can offer us.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69565217391 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7200033754 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5629446603 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186449073661 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068442215994 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365498174705 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102122618456 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329928838967 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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