In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
it is argued that in some countries people are tend to shop at large out of town stores rather than small town centers, and people without cars have limited access to out of town stores which may result in increase in the use of cars. the merit here will be economic growth and demerit is environment harm caused b vehicles.
the people prefer to shop at far distanced stores rather then local stores , as the stores are out of town it takes less money to built it and the prices in the out of town stores are cheaper compared to the small town stores. So the business for out of town are increasing gradually which enlarges the industrial economic growth. The cars are used regularly for shopping and as for that fuel consumption will be gradually increase and people who does not posses a car would be using public transportations or cabs for shopping at out of town stores the access will be limited. there maybe increase in the sales of cars too.
The vehicles would be used more often and there will more vehicles to be used, the consumption of more fuel takes place which is overusing of natural resources. These vehicles emit green house gases which are harmful for the environment
in conclusion, there maybe economical growth in industries and customers getting products for cheaper price but it is leading to damage the environment which would be a great drawback. The disadvantage here surpasses the advantages because environment here is greater priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is argued that in some countries people...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...ntries people are tend to shop at large out of town stores rather than small town centers, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...ple without cars have limited access to out of town stores which may result in increase in ...
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... result in increase in the use of cars. the merit here will be economic growth and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... to shop at far distanced stores rather then local stores , as the stores are out of...
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...istanced stores rather then local stores , as the stores are out of town it takes ...
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Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
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...hich are harmful for the environment in conclusion, there maybe economical grow...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...vironment in conclusion, there maybe economical growth in industries and customers gett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81102362205 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55022595888 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488188976378 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2491559745 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.777777778 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450033339265 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188312687998 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228303777162 0.0667982634062 342% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266902755196 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262385901798 0.056905535591 461% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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