Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people consider that speaker an international sports organisation either effect good for the nation. Meanwhile on the other hand individual ponder it wrong to do. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
First, it is not doubt sports is essential part of life but also there are so many sports available on schools, colleges, universities and they has playing international level. Moreover, youth are very awareness about sports like cricket, hockey, football, tenniss, badmintion and so on .Otherwise, who must benefits for health and fitness as well as youngster has crazy about learning new things as why they have interest definitely try it.
Moving forward, in these days in any sports has using comedy and even given speech about what players play in the game. I think that it is very good for audience or judge neither they can choose best player for this games. Therefore, sometimes famous celebrities come for stadium for promote their favorite team who they are likes . In fact , it is good path to appreciate for their player. Last but not the least, two has hosting extremely available for any sports which player play well in game .
All said done, I reckon, sport important
role in life nor adolescents and pupils can pla they might learn new skill in sports. This, in future they can choose in career line.
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...ure they can choose in career line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i reckon, i think, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96475770925 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.524395153 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68281938326 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3435705303 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205846683041 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074517226749 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824094586848 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995490108653 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905352585693 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.