Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...play vital role in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnc...
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...le in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnce on each ot...
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...nce on each other. There few masses are think that the tribe is necessary part of lif...
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...essary part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and...
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...part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I...
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... than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I will delve my ...
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...comming pharagraphs. To commence with,there are various perspectives about family.I...
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...e are various perspectives about family.It is first stage of life due to blood con...
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...nts give birth to us. Probing further,parents are well supported for infants.They are...
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...,parents are well supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their life as...
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...l supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their life as well. To c...
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...ll in their life as well. To conclude,both are important however in my opinion pe...
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...both are important however in my opinion people should never forget kindness of t...
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...forget kindness of their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are ...
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... their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are doing evil behavior with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31297709924 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32304026236 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.748091603053 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.520533101 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120187269868 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545600115984 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477424495353 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555717708338 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557193792335 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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