Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Animal testing has been a well-known and normal stage of procedures for decades now. There is a dispute between many of whether it should be outlawed or continued for the sake of "important" scientific discoveries. In my essay, I will go on to explain why not only is this unjust, but also how we are reducing Earth to being uninhabitable.
First and foremost, imagine yourself in a closed cage while being poked and picked at. If just the thought is horrifying, know that many animals have to spend their entire life being experimented on. These are sentient beings, like us, yet those who perform these cruel activities, such as animal testing for cosmetic purposes, choose to ignore that. Materialism, superficial-ism and superiority of human advancement covers their reasons. As a non-scientific professional, I cannot comment on the alternatives, but I suggest work to be done on finding these substitutes.
Furthermore, supposing the procedure was painless, we cannot deny that a seemingly safe vial of injection may cause an animal's death. Studies show, that such consequences are a leading cause towards endangerment of test animals. This just goes to show how we are deliberately disturbing the natural order of mother earth. Scientists are well aware of the food-chain and its impact on regulation of the ecosystem.
In conclusion, I believe there is no way one can justify animal experimentation other than plain satisfaction of a curious mind, which is just not worth it. This needs to be an urgent matter taken up at United Nation's Climate Change 27th conference, last held in Scotland. We are in the 21st century, an era of limitless knowledge, yet we are readily heading towards our own destruction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...gly safe vial of injection may cause an animals death. Studies show, that such conseque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21940509825 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684397163121 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5406032208 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24842535291 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664508952305 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643212012684 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133277000743 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581763023978 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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