Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
The advancement of science had resulted in critters and other animals being raised and used in experiments. While there are general benefits, this behavior should be confronted and excommunicated by the community when alternate options are available.
At first glance, the continuation of abusing animals is frequently attributed to the "low life" opinion society has on animals. Arguments such as the value of animal life weigh lighter than that of people are often brought up. However, several scientific discoveries have evident that animals also display feelings and emotions, intelligence, as well as advanced interpersonal skills. The IQ of some animals such as monkeys and parrots even reach the level of children. Therefore, tormenting them through experimentation should be condemned as significant as harming children and considered a crime. Moreover the abuse of animals can also affect people's mindset when choosing the end product resulted from those experiment. This can be clearly proved by several cases of videos shared among society mentioning the cruelty the animals faced. This heavily affect the marketing and the sales of such beauty cosmetics and medicine involved.
Looking at the other side of the argument, there are notion that animal experimentation help bring about new advancement. Although this is a fair point thus far, the field of science have since come a long way. Scientists nowadays possess the ability to create new biological matter that bears resemblance to that of human. This would assist the conducting of experiment in several fields such as chemistry, biology, medical and interconnecting subjects. Therefore, lessen and the eventual abomination of animal experimentation is foreseeable .
In conclusion, animal cruelty in science is unacceptable and there have been alternatives to solve the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64056939502 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06477567813 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3760544206 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356005663216 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103361245888 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681892302164 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188802198611 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799947360799 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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