Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only thinks about their own wishes. Other people believe that is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
The fast forward society is affecting the children brain to do the work as they wish and only think about the work they want to do. I opine that the giving freedom to children is good for making own decisions but the parents has also want to look their children and keep control over them. This essay will scrutinize the aspects of the quandary in the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, the parents are allowing their young ones to do their choices about their daily life because they think their children are now mature and have proper understanding about the society and when the children follow the path of own decisions, at one time they become selfish and have rude nature. Furthermore, the young age think the food, clothes and entertainment they consume is always right and make comparison with friends about how their parents give permissions. For example, A survey of 2019 elucidates that 40% of teenagers whose age is only 18 have started consuming alcohol and tobacco because of their parents' permission.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that some parents are also allowing their children to make their decisions own as they will become confident in their life and not depend on their family but the children also their plans with their family. Similarly, the parents also guide their children which things are good or bad for their life in order to children will understand the society and make their own choices. To exemplify, A report of 2020 illustrates that the children who are mature also take permission from their Parents and family member to finalize the decision they made.
In conclusion, an overall perspective without a shadow of doubt, I am inclined to believe that the parents who are allowing the exorbitant life to children and have said to take their decision themselves so the parents have to think that giving all permission is beneficial or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
... own decisions but the parents has also want to look their children and keep control...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rude nature. Furthermore, the young age think the food, clothes and entertainmen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se age is only 18 have started consuming alcohol and tobacco because of their par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90282131661 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47636601417 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479623824451 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0800276583 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.4 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337723591881 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146055380783 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860343499561 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208448320217 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642519886765 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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