Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Some people could argue that letting children decide everyday matters all by themselves might lead to a society full of selfish and greedy individuals. However, there some opinions stating that children need to make their own choices about matters affecting their lives. I support the second opinion because I believe the ability to make decisions is crucial to every child.
On the one hand, there are some risks when children are permitted to make their own choices. First of all, without proper regulation, the young generation can be spoiled. Because they have all the right to do anything following their wishes, they seem to grow up being stubborn and disobedient. As a consequence, this lack of education and orientation from an early age might potentially turn them into greedy and selfish people.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that allowing children to make decisions about their daily matters is critical for their later lives. Children who experienced making their own choices are likely to have better sense of thinking and reasoning. By deciding, they are taught to analyse a matter in every aspects. Moreover, it is necessary for children to take charge of their own lives. They are brought up being responsible, determine and trust-worthy, which might result in their achievements and success in their career.
In conclusion, children who are allowed to make decisions on their own might become the one who only think about their demands only. Nevertheless, it is nearly impossible if appropriate method is applied, and it is significantly important that they are given the chance to take responsibility of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13382899628 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74646477861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4640973031 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426199738969 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146429892121 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114000898741 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263276986755 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942098445932 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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