Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While a group of people have this thought that allowing the young generation to gain their independence is essential, others tend to claim there might be significant consequences influencing a child’s both social and personal life. I will explain each view elaborately in this essay.
On the one hand, having parent’s permanent support in every situation could be noticeably admiring for children. In addition, this will strengthen the family bond and exclusively absorbing positive patterns of behavior which indeed can lessen delinquency at a large scale. Moreover, individuals have the opportunity to learn from older people’s experiences in order to avoid repeating the same mistake. For instance, in the case of clothing, some teenagers seem to be easily tricked by a sale person unless an adult guides them through choosing the best item including material, size and etc.
On the other hand, In today’s world there is a greater number of young people, that appears to be extremely eager for gaining their independence although they might face failures and difficulties in on this path. However, if they powerfully took this step it would massively enhance both inner and outer performance. Such as a high level of self-confidence and responsibility toward their actions. Furthermore, a sense of appreciation tends to be motivated Because of lacking family’s instant protection. Thus, children will appreciate the value of matters like money which could be considered to develop maturity. Meaning that not only effective attitudes will grow but also a/the considerable number of wise individuals may hopefully arise.
Overall, it is logical to conclude that grown up grown-up’s direct supervision over their sons and daughters has made self-dependency a challenging and potentially difficult to achieve still possible; nevertheless, practical measures need to be done in this way.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... the best item including material, size and etc. On the other hand, In today’s world ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53767123288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10157338446 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705479452055 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6175321759 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119146107589 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390020121708 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03569035648 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673111588422 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290444653988 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... the best item including material, size and etc. On the other hand, In today’s world ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53767123288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10157338446 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705479452055 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6175321759 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119146107589 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390020121708 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03569035648 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673111588422 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290444653988 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.