Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Using or eliminating capital punishment is always a topic of interest, as it generates a great deal of argument. Although I sympathize that corporal punishment should not be given, I believe that it is necessary in some cases.
On the one hand, poverty sometimes puts a strain on the underprivileged, and therefore they turn to crime to earn a good living. For instance, a Vietnamese youngster took responsible for delivering 7 tons of drug to receive a sum of money, but unfortunately, he was arrested and was on the brink of being given capital punishment, leaving behind two younger brothers. However, because of the lack of knowledge and acquirement, he could not imagine how serious his action was. Therefore, corporal punishment may too cruel for those who making a crime of passion. Furthermore, if offenders can receive a chance of rehabilitation, they will be reformed and become law-abiding members of society,
On the other hand, those who commit serious crimes such as murder, drug trafficking,... cannot be tolerated. As the victims lose their lives, whereas the murderers release back into civilization after serving a prison sentence, this inequality can provoke a public outcry or even a demonstration. Accordingly, corporal punishment can introduce restrictions on people’s action, and consequently, they take into account what they should do to address their problem, in lieu of turning to crime impulsively.
In conclusion, capital punishment plays an integral part in some situations, and the national and local authorities should desperate attempt to contemplate and impose regulations on its range of usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39299610895 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25178708013 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657587548638 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.072496126 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266951047887 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945753780702 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644252007228 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157204001133 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536614072584 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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