Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that concerning about staffs’ clothes is not necessary in stead of focusing on effectiveness. In my essay, I agree partly about this acute argument because both uniforms and effectiveness should be necessary in some particular situations.
On the one hand, implementing a consistent dress particularly should bring several advantages. Firstly, formal uniforms make employees professional. Basing on this, their customers and partners should trust these polite employees at the first observation. As a result, these are easy to make a deal with their customers and partners. In addition, uniforms not only are professional corners, but also they must be stood for an organization’s goodwill. For example, most of commercial banks have such typical uniforms that customers aware their goodwill beneficially. Because of the goodwill importance, the owners of banks often project a high budget and well-paid designers to generate particular dresses with their awareness targets.
On the other hand, the productiveness at work is core value at any institution. To be more detailed, strictly controlling the employees and neglecting on final results in working do not allow the owners to touch the great performance in general. A reason for this is that the main character of business takes profit as more as possible. Thus, the top supervisions have to priority the effectiveness instead of monitoring the staffs’ clothes. One more corner for the owners do need centralize so much to the dress of workers is various composites in working environment. For instant, a marketing and creative organization often allows their staffs to choose dressings which are suit to the nation costume. This implementation could bring the diversity in the working space, thus this enhances creation factors and lift up the effectiveness.
In conclusion, dressing the polite uniform is extremely important for serious events while working out the outperformance at work enables employers to evaluate their staffs accurately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
... about staffs’ clothes is not necessary in stead of focusing on effectiveness. In my essay,...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...racter of business takes profit as more as possible. Thus, the top supervisions ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56451612903 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15987624726 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.82480816 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.470588235 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273478080799 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756938681832 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585716299596 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163422026271 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605918371762 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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