Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Plenty of people rely on that it is best to recieve a bad condition such as an no satisfactory occupation or lack of money. Other people due to that it is better to attempt and changing to improvment such condition.
Nowadays, people say that they see many type of difficulty in their life an example, may be lack of money, unenjoyable job and other ones however think this point which persons ought to accept with good mood. On the other ones consider that should try to improve this condition.
In my view, actually, if people have a problem with their job or money, they must have accepted it with good mood this is why you are sad it is not brought useful only lose your energy. A good example, at the moment, my family encounter a lot of failures however we do not lose our patient and try to improve them. Really, before we could cry only but did not achieve anything with it.
On the other hand, people, do habits this conditons and do not try to change them especially, they persuading ownself to bad life. It is worst for people this is why if you have a problem than you leave the worst ones and achieving your goals in your life.
An example, approximately two years ago, i had seen a family then they persuaded themselves in this ones and maybe poor life is loved by them. Therefore they had several type of chances there are plenty of jobs and a one of the good chance is earned money them unfortunately they afraid of what put the first step.
To sum up, i think that both of points considerably realesed by people and people should try to grow life achievement and not afraid of anything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...best to recieve a bad condition such as an no satisfactory occupation or lack of m...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...on. Nowadays, people say that they see many type of difficulty in their life an example,...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n example, approximately two years ago, i had seen a family then they persuaded t...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...amily then they persuaded themselves in this ones and maybe poor life is loved by th...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s and maybe poor life is loved by them. Therefore they had several type of chances there ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'several types'.
Suggestion: several types
...fe is loved by them. Therefore they had several type of chances there are plenty of jobs and...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...ance is earned money them unfortunately they afraid of what put the first step. To sum up,...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of what put the first step. To sum up, i think that both of points considerably ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, i think, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41750841751 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39685710616 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8434511274 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219743689681 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944469406141 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801856944586 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129737705384 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104997958461 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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