some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In spite of some people think that the best is to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, others believe that it is better to try and improve the situation. In my opinion, it could not be far-fetched to hold the view that we do not have a chance to be calm in all situations.
Some people who agree with accept the bad situation try to live at the moment, so they are not worried about any threat such as; unsatisfactory job or shortage of job money. They believe the economic situation is the same in every job department and satisfactory.
Although a proportion of people agree with this approach that less money is not a matter, sometimes this situation is too hard, and so they could not accept it. For example, when they need more money for their children's education or they have not insurance to cure their diseases.
Whether or not it had been better to try and improve such a situation is another approach. Many people try to solve the problem because of hope. They believe with the hope they will have better life and situation. The more they have hope, the more they have opportunities to have a far better life. A good illustration of this is people working in coal mines without air conditions lose their health. Whom, they have hope to find a better job, have a more chance to stay alive.
In conclusion, in no way do I agree that at any time we can accept the bad situation. I think people with hope have a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ey, others believe that it is better to try and improve the situation. In my opinion, i...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
... not insurance to cure their diseases. Whether or not it had been better to try and improve s...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
.... Whether or not it had been better to try and improve such a situation is another app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44649446494 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54663880594 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468634686347 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7056847528 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0714285714 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31416254223 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122486071664 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131883096426 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200435200095 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124879613142 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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