Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situations, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about a negative conditions we need to be accepted or changed. While accepting can sometimes be benefit in life, I believe that the ability to change is more important.
On the one hand,acceptance can let us more calm. When we face a bad circumstance, such as unhappy work or lack of money, we accept it instead of complaining means that we’ve grown up and we have encouragement to face the difficult life. This encouragement will help us to calm down and find the solutions or thinking our life better. However, accept the bad situation means that we don’t want to change and it is the negative attitude to our life. Blindly accept the bad situation will lead us lost the confidence and skill to challenge the hardship.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to change the bad status for us to improve our life. In well-being aspect, if we try our best to transform the terrible situations, we will get a great sense of success which can improve our self-efficacy and the level of well-being. In the development of personal aspect, try and improve these situations will promote our competence in solving problems which will benefit our ability and grow. Also, changing the negative conditions will help us to be a successful person who have confidence to face the difficulties in life.
In conclusion, I can understand why people accept the bad situation in our life, but it seems to me that try our best to change this situation is much more important in future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , acceptance
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... In the development of personal aspect, try and improve these situations will promote o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8320670481 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7748595316 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181143497624 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757668607005 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453983748797 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125075895573 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03356923067 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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