Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
In the salad days of millennium, the society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether getting insights of a non-native language in order to travel or work in that country, or there are other causes for learning a foreign language. Different people have distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. First and foremost, one usually acquire a new language because he or she hope that it will help them for better communication with new people. As a result, if one usually use different language to travel or work in that region, they consider it won’t be efficient for them talking an unknown language with new people. They actually learn it for personal benefits. For instance, one won’t learn Chinese language without use at work or travel because it is so-hard to be skilled. Secondly, mastering a second language is always time consuming. People in this contemporary world is always busy with their profession and without travel or work a person with toiling schedule won’t be able to spend his valuable time without some work or travel outcomes.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, there can be some other causes like study purpose. A student may need to learn new language if they want to study in the curriculum of that subject. Without being skilled in that subject he or she may face communication problems with tutors or other students. Moreover, if somebody wants to appreciate art, music and films of a foreign language he or she needs to be skillful in that language. By way of illustration, one may love German songs and without knowing German it won’t be possible for him to fully enjoy the traditional genres of art, music and film in this language.
Moving discussed the arguments, I would like to infer that it may vary from person to person, but there can be plethora of reasons to learn a language and work or travel aren’t the only two causes to gain insights in a foreign language. To justify my state of mind, the instance of German language mentioned above can be an apt reason.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hopes'.
Suggestion: hopes
...cquire a new language because he or she hope that it will help them for better commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87368421053 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62465404659 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502631578947 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6522237406 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.941176471 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899312760605 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325326721599 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321322204194 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531255044941 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166800759343 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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