Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, government plays a key role in establishing regulations related to the healthy lifestyle of inhabitants. However, it is more crucial to say that humans ought to have their own beneficial methods to improve their lives.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly true that the laws from various departments of a nation can be an essential factor for determining the life of civilians. An example can be illustrated due to the eating habits of young people. Researchers in Asia highlight that youngsters aged less than 15 are eating a large amount of junk food which causes adverse impacts on their bodies in the long term. The behavior of increasing taxes based on this commodity can make the price of junk food increase and consequently, children may decrease their demands of using this kind of diet.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the importance of government, the specific methods from each person related to healthy lifestyles are more crucial. related to the instance from increasing the price of products, the solutions from national departments may not abundance if people do not understand the adverse influences of the fat with their body parts. When eaters learn about the nutrients from magazines or lessons carefully, they will manage their habits with the more absorption of beneficial products like vegetables or fruits. this activity can be described as a fundamental factor for balancing a healthy life.
In conclusion, for the purpose of balancing life, although government is critical for civilians, the activities of each person are more essential.
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give 11
- consumer durables owned in britain from 1972 to 1983 Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his her own healthy lifestyle Others believe that governments should take care of it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24015748031 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93468750036 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9340365193 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.031584939145 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013621845859 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141582145554 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0152409165279 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155830559817 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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