Some people believe that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of modernization and technical progress, economic growth may harm nature so it is frequently said that a nation can not achieve economic prosperity and ambient preservation at the same time. Although the repercussions of economic development can not be denied, I believe that these countries can address environmental problems with the reasons provided below.
It is easy to understand why numerous people argue that economic success, which is an outcome of increased industrialization and urbanization, will hurt the environment. One of the consequences is that chemicals, especially exhaust fumes and carbon, are released into the atmosphere, polluting the air and water resources as a consequence of factory operations. According to the Global Carbon Project (GCP) report, carbon footprints from fossil and industrial use accounted for a large proportion, and reached a record of about 36.8 of the total 43.1 billion tons (in 2019), this figure had risen around 0.6% compared with 2018. Moreover, economic growth leads to global warming and volatile weather, which threaten the living environment of not only a variety of animals but also humans.
Nevertheless, a nation, which is economically powerful, still has measures to solve these problems. To begin with, governments could introduce laws to encourage factories to reuse materials and reprocess wastes by modern technologies or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power.For instance, in Singapore, they burn all the entire country’s waste before collecting the ashes, shipping it to an artificial island to dump in its sea; or absorbing about 90% of the trash in this country to process and turning it into electricity. Besides, individuals should also be able to take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. It means citizens can do activities to save the natural world by taking public transport rather than driving, choosing products with less packaging, and recycling as much as possible.
In conclusion, I contend that it is not impossible to attain environmental cleanliness during the process of economic development, provided that people notice the aspect of ecological safety from the inception of any industrial or manufacturing process, and both governments and individuals have methods to maintain the environment clean.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... energy from solar, wind or water power.For instance, in Singapore, they burn all t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15726161885 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.332771493 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.0 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0909090909 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198191571592 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065877985642 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474449551822 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113012023398 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033972674856 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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