Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomena of healthcare, diet and their corresponding impacts on both individuals and societies have sparked a long-running dispute among different groups, especially human activists and governments. In this regard, whereas some believe it is the mere responsibility of governments to spread the healthy culture of diet, others are the opinion of taking care of their health and following a healthy consumption are the sole responsibility of an individual. In my mind, a tradeoff between both vantage points might have the most outcome.
On the one hand, it is the firm conviction of many that governments are in charge of healthcare. By that they mean, food, beverage, and pharmaceutical productions should be supervised strictly by governments. Moreover, income tax is nowadays obligatory. Hence, governments have to allocate the required budget to healthcare and insurance segmentation. Furthermore, the patriarchal role of the government cannot be overlooked. Pertinent to this concept, the government should figure out the healthiest possible infrastructure in society, which can increase citizens' awareness.
On the other hand, others who in general might believe more in self-sufficiency and self-reliance believe that every individual is responsible for his or her health condition. To give an instance, they have the required freedom to choose between imported or local manufacturers’ products. Furthermore, they check constantly the nutrition’s fact labels, expiry date as well as surf in related websites, while purchasing products. As a result of that, they can have a better balance of calory consumption. Integration in physical activities is also another feature of this group in order to stay healthier.
To sum up, despite the discussed compelling reasons of both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea of the citizens-government coalition, which means, governments should provide the required infrastructure in many ways ranging from sports clubs to informative websites in order to increase the society’s self-awareness.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in general, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76221498371 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48582297513 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3028637103 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323134035202 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772888847623 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962499750301 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170357544353 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117985833001 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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