Some people believe that it's best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Each individual has different approaches to unfavourably conditions. however, some people opined that it is preferable to accept whatever life throws at them. Whether it is a disappointing job or lack of financial stability whereas others believe that one should look for better opportunities in life. this essay will discuss both these views and proffer the benefits of improving bad situations in life.
On one hand, few people choose to accept bad circumstances instead of finding measures for a positive outcome. they think that nothing good will come out of it or simply want to go with the flow so as to learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his physics examination. however, he only needed one mark to get an A. As the teacher went through the questions with the whole class, he realised that he had accidentally marked one correct answer wrong. so, realistically he would have got an A but he chooses to leave it as a B believing that he will be motivated to work harder to improve his grade in subsequent examinations. Hence, this explains why some people choose to accept a bad situation.
On the other hand, other individuals believe that, it is better to change rather than adjusting with the circumstances they detest. they put in lots of effort and time to achieve their desired goals and conducive lifestyles. For instance, someone who experiences shortage of money to carter for his or her daily needs and expense, will feel a little paranoid that if measures are not taken for positive solutions they might experience empty pocket and end up living on the streets without a roof over their heads. Regarding this, they take up extra part-time jobs to boost their income. this will help meet their daily needs thereby living a worry and stress-free life.
In conclusion, in my opinion, l strongly suggest that every person when faced with a bad situation, should always learn to analyse it and proffer possible solutions to them. The journey may be painful at the beginning, one should think wisely and embrace so as to live a beautiful, desirable, and successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90358126722 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75160142449 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600550964187 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9637647191 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155914706509 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495416749124 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659778623788 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986263893963 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816049767058 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.