Some people believe that it s good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Scientists can save time using data from other researchers to verify a new theory. Businessmen can benefit from cooperation with other companies by sharing information. Students can gain more when discussing problems with partners, exchanging ideas. However, views may vary greatly on whether all information can be shared.
Some people contend that information about scientific research, business and other academic studies can facilitate the development in those fields. For example, it is a waste of time for a biologist to count the number of species in a certain place by himself. However, with other reports about the flora and fauna species from other researchers, there is no need for the biologist to do this time-consuming work, which saves precious time and enables him to concentrate on addressing the ecosystem problems. In addition, exchanging information can boost the economy. For instance, the camera has become an indispensable part of a mobile phone. Nowadays, Oppo, a well-known smartphone company chooses to work with another company which is famous for its excellent camera. After exchanging ideas about the design and technology about the camera, both companies have seen considerable rises in their sales. Both can profit a lot from this cooperation.
However, others maintain that not all information can be shared in that some can be classified and crucial. For example, a profitable restaurant can be so competitive mainly due to its special flavor which attracts regular customers. If the boss shares the secret of specialties with others, I believe that other restaurants are capable of making the same profits or even going beyond that restaurant. Besides, the manufacturing process of the car is also confidential. That is why the vehicle engines differ greatly in different countries.
In my opinion, in scientific field, scientists need to share information as much as possible for the sake of stimulating and making contributions to the development altogether, while in other fields where everyone is in the competition like business companies, some information should be kept secretly.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-24 | benj212 | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-13 | Mouaz1994 | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | mirolinquency | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-08 | wondertran | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-28 | Asma Shahin | 84 | view |
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 67
- The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparis 78
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 56
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 78
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46060606061 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03629105339 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8810878111 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234589244872 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702177705361 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830759962965 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155550724394 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508061211939 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.