Some people believe that no one should do the same job for all their working life. Others argue that doing the same job brings advantages for individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that people should not work one job for their entire life, while others believe that remain same work guarantee benefits for themselves, their firms and society.
On the one hand, staff keeping their same job stand a higher chance of getting promotion. This stems from their fact that these people have accumulated sufficient years of experiences which implies their high productivity and efficiency. From company's perspectives, they would not be able to maintain their normal operation without an organized workforce, therefore the role of loyal employees is significant. Likewise, workers who take the same jobs for years tend to receive a stable income, thereby being able to make their living and raise their families. Thus, they could contribute a positive impact on community.
On the other hand, new jobs would offer people more opportunities in forms of experience or finance. Firsly, individuals can gain more experiences from different working environment. As workers change to a new workplace, they are likely to start learning new ways of solving tasks, which means that their professional knowledge are broadened. Besides, salary increments or financial rewards are important for ones in order to improve their living standard and live better off. Finally, landing a new job also means that job holders can establish new relationships, which help them to achieve career progression in their later life.
In the light of these facts, even though maintaing same work would help one climb on career ladder and excel at their daily tasks, having a new job would be more beneficial in terms of their personal and proffessional development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28679245283 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7420904733 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7344387622 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295674932741 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110935737439 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10480504405 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215688975903 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117184054097 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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