Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an obvious fact that sportsmen and entertainment faces are getting more money for their work and promotions. However, some people think that professional workers as doctors and teachers should earn a higher salary compared to the former. I agree that professional people should be paid higher than others due to some reasons below.
Firstly, professional workers have to spend many years studying and researching to become excellent specialists in their field. For instance, to succeed in medicine, a practitioner is supposed to study for 6 years in a row, then they must continue their study for 3 years to obtain master degrees. Furthermore, they have a long career while sports people do their job only for 20-25 people depend on their activity.
Nevertheless, some people think that sports people and celebrities hold vital contributions to the community. The main idea is that their accomplishments in their fields such as enormous concerts or astonishing triumphs at world competitions, it also an amazing achievement for the whole country. However, their contribution to society is less important compared to professional workers
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05716624214 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5969416692 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248199172133 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115253179198 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996665264299 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181988466751 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124065500079 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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