Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should work in any country they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
In recent years, there is an argument that professional workers, such as doctors or engineers should be preserved in the specific areas where they had professional curriculums. However, others have argued that they should apply to work freely in any country they pursue. Although it is undeniable that keeping them to stay and work in the area they are educated is enormously lucrative, I strongly believe that advanced workers should have freedom and make up their minds about the place where they always dream to work and devote themselves. This essay will analyze why on the one side if they are kept, there will be huge merits the country gets, but having the freedom to make choices where they can work can help them avoid some detrimental situations such as illness.
First and foremost, it is important to conserve experts such as in medicine or engineering can bring lots of benefits. For example, some advanced technologies made by talented engineers like in automotive companies truly should be kept by virtue of making a profit with the monopoly technology. On the other hand, having communication or collaboration in the mother language helps them have good conservation and easily reach success in
On the contrary, human-being throughout developed and developing countries can be affected by disadvantageous cases such as severe illness. For example, when there is an epidemic, the shortage of doctors or nurses who support the medical sectors to provide proper treatment through vaccinations and injections would raise due to such countries. Therefore, to avoid this situation worse, hiring international workers is like acquiring assistance from foreigners no matter of geographical barriers. Hence, people should give the freedom to select anywhere to live and work.
On the whole, it is thought that getting professional workers in the specific areas where they are educated can be immensely beneficial, but to my mind, it will be better as they are free to make a decision of place they have a dream.
In conclusion, in spite of keeping people who are professional in such developed careers medicine or engineering brings valuable opportunities to improve, they should work in the country they pursue and give them a chance to enrich their knowledge and experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conservation and easily reach success in On the contrary, human-being throughout ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the contrary, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88667374919 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539295392954 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.191424304 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.5 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42909992998 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16401881041 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110925150707 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232011417356 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12455451496 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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