Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should work in any country they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
In recent decades, there has been an argument that professional workers majoring in fields such as medicine or engineering should be preserved in the area where they were educated. However, others argue that they should have the freedom to choose where they pursue to work and live. Although there are numerous highly beneficial impacts that advanced workers bring to the country that training programs provided. I strongly believe that professionals should be allowed to work in any region of the world that they desire to devote themselves. This essay will analyze why people who work as doctors or engineers are kept in the country benefit that places such as in technology, but due to the serious diseases in many advanced countries, they should be given the opportunity to work anywhere they want.
First and foremost, since the advent of industrialization, a number of world-famous technology are being made by talented engineers in such well-known automotive companies. These corporations try their best to keep foreign workers around to avoid technology spills and make a profit with the monopoly technology for such companies. in addition, if there is communication or collaboration with the same mother language will produce technological development in a simple way.
In the contrast, people who are working in developing or developed countries are significantly affected by lots of severe illnesses. For example, in China, during the time of epidemic, there is a shortage of doctors, nurses, and workers who support the medical sector is problematic to provide vaccinations and injections to patients due to the massive number of populations. Therefore, hiring international workers or acquiring assistance from abroad cannot be denied. Hence, advanced workers should have a chance to make a decision about anywhere they hope to belong without geographical barriers.
On the whole, the majority of people consider that professionals should be demanded to work in the region where they finished their professionalism, I do believe that they need not be pressured of being stay or live in that place but have the decision-making about the place they desire to apply for their work.
in conclusion, although there are huge advantageous merits of conserving advanced workers in the country they did their training such as in the field of technology; however, the graduates should have an allowance to weight their options about where they wish to belong without any limitation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...monopoly technology for such companies. in addition, if there is communication or ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will produce technological development in a simple way. In the contrast, people who are worki...
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Suggestion: In
...e they desire to apply for their work. in conclusion, although there are huge adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35114503817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0303281753 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52417302799 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4433327353 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.214285714 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435539694641 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147209103983 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120333946572 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243763690684 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147768260095 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...monopoly technology for such companies. in addition, if there is communication or ...
^^
Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will produce technological development in a simple way. In the contrast, people who are worki...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...e they desire to apply for their work. in conclusion, although there are huge adv...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35114503817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0303281753 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52417302799 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4433327353 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.214285714 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435539694641 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147209103983 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120333946572 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243763690684 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147768260095 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.