Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As the number of professionals workking abroad increases, itis often discussed whether they should stay where hey did their trainings or they should be free to move to another country if they desired to. while | believe theat a person should be free to migrate, I agree that it has negative effects on the country of training.
On the one hand, professionals who decide to work abroad are seeking for a different lifestyle and career opportunities. Therefore, they should be allowed to improve their lives outside the limitations of their country of origin. For example, whilst in Spain residents in a hospital do not have hands-on experience due to safely measures, in other countries such as Argentina, residents actually practice
their skills with patients. Besides, cultural exchanges have proven to increase efficiency, since different nationalities mean different believes and the introduction of new methods.
On the other hand, when professionals leave the country where they trained, countries are damaged socially and economically, in countries where the government provides free education and healthcare, many people think that the population should compensate the country with their skills and abilities. Furthermore, as a study fo South African emigration has pointed out when a professional lease the country it results in the loss of 10 unskilled jobs. Therefore it affect the economy and the community
Taking everything into account, it can be. said that miving out from the country of training should not be taken lightly, given the adverse effects on the population. However, | firmly believe that someone's professional development should not depend on their country of origin and professionals should be allowed to look for better opportunities overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Their
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Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
... different nationalities mean different believes and the introduction of new methods. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...sults in the loss of 10 unskilled jobs. Therefore it affect the economy and the community...
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...loss of 10 unskilled jobs. Therefore it affect the economy and the community Taking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51824817518 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99470933046 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7711077722 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487328753302 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171221330916 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123856343992 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251050419833 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135696811454 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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