Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the period of technology, it is true that many children prefer watching Tv or playing computer games to reading books. Some people tend towards the viewpoint that reading stories from books brings more merits for children than playing games or watching movies on TV, and in my opinion, I strongly agree with this phenomenon.
Firstly, there are various advantages from reading books. One of the main benefits is that it helps the children in their studies. This is because reading habit will enhance their reading skills, their writing skills, and so on and so forth. Besides, they can gain deeper insight into any fields from books. Therefore, they could become able students and get high scores in school. According to a study, 80 % of students who have reading habit passed the literature exams with higher grades than other students.
Furthermore, reading habit also helps children in their comprehensive development. Reading books will improve their imagination, their wisdom, their memories, etc. If they read a puzzle book, they will develop their wisdom. Additionally, each book brings a life lesson, thus children can have some experience to surpass if they meet the same situation. The more books children read, the more knowledgeable they have. For example, a research argues that at the same age, children who read books having knowledge about everything in the world higher than other students.
To sum up, it seems to me that reading books has more merits for children than watching TV or playing games on computer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14741035857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51559760147 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4458485715 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335983772508 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120741427313 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112994552835 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262322992925 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142448079516 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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