Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
“Are the robots necessary for the life of people?” This is the argumentation that people have different views about the influences of robots on human societies. While in some way it may seem reasonable to find the negative drawbacks, I personally believe that robots are important for people in daily tasks or industrial production activities.
There are various effects why automatic machines could be considered beneficial to allow people to use them in human life. First of all, robots used in the industrial majority could not only do manual jobs quickly such as assembling the components of a product and packing many products but also achieve the highest accuracy. Because of taking part in the production, they could be continuously run every time during working hours. For example, the supervisors of a factory only turn on the buttons to start a production process, which does not need a lot of people in all processes, which led to saving a lot of money to pay staff salaries every month. In addition, the most popular benefit is making time extra time for humans to spend doing what they want. For instance, if people launch the time for a vacuum cleaner robot in order to start running in their houses, it is doing its task while they are working at their companies.
On the other hand, although robots have numerous benefits, there are certain adverse drawbacks of robots. Interestingly, humans, who prefer using an automatic machine rather than doing manual, would become dependent on robots so they will lose soft skills like cooking, and human communication. Furthermore, the ratio of unemployed people will be risen due to being replaced by machines. To give a clear example, almost all unimportant jobs such as service checkouts in supermarkets, factory workers are laid off the highest number compared to other positions or jobs. Thus, increasingly they are improved in order to adapt to higher requests from their company unless they lose their work. Additionally, when the unemployment rate is high, which led to bigger social problems such as poverty or crime. To illustrate, if we have a social gap too large or the crime rate is so high, taxes will be reduced leading to lower social benefits.
In conclusion, although there are beneficial effects and adverse drawbacks to using robots, it seems to me that it would be better when they use the robots in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9825436409 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590938985 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571072319202 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5600315186 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182979529663 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620064868171 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622926307976 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128085671868 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838816962088 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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