Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that people have different views about the influences and necessity of robots on human societies. While, in some way, it may seem reasonable to find some certain drawbacks, I personally believe that robots play an important role in people’s daily tasks or industrial production activities.
There are various effects why these automatic machines could be considered to be beneficial to people's life. First of all, robots used in the majority of main industries could not only do manual jobs quickly such as assembling the components of a product and packing many products but also achieve the highest accuracy. Moreover, If the robots take part in the production process more directly, they could be ready to operate every time during working hours. For example, supervisors of a factory only turn on the buttons to start the production process, which creates less need for manpower, leading to lower cost of running the company or less labor cost. More importantly, the use of these miracle machines could make much extra time for humans to spend doing what they want. For instance, people only launch a vacuum cleaner, and then it is doing its task while they are reading, chatting to friends or even traveling.
On the other hand, although robots have brought numerous benefits, there are certain adverse drawbacks. Interestingly, humans, who prefer using robots to doing manual, would become more dependent on these automatic machines, and gradually they will lose soft skills like cooking, human communication… Furthermore, when machines can replace workers to perform the work, the ratio of unemployed people will rise. In fact, many people worry that employees performing the tasks of unimportant jobs, such as supplying services at the checkout counter in supermarkets, or workers working in factories that require more accuracy are laid off at an alarming rate in the future when the use of the robots becomes more and more prevalent. Additionally, the high unemployment rate could be one of the main reasons for bigger social problems such as poverty or crime. To illustrate, in African countries where the social gap becomes too large, and the crime rate is so high, taxes are reduced, leading to lower social welfares.
In conclusion, although there are beneficial effects and adverse drawbacks to the use of robots, it seems to me that our life would be much better with the existence of these miracle machines in daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13216957606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68641642875 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581047381546 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1442629032 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173873403371 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645426945157 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719639008728 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12291977067 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111035913312 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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