Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem
It is true that there is an increase in the rate of crimes that are committed by minors in metropolitans around the globe. There are a number of reasons behind this tendency and several solutions should be adopted by the governments to improve the situation.
There are two main reasons why the age of criminals is getting younger. One reason is due to the widespread use of the mass media. Teenagers nowadays can effortlessly gain access to the enormous amount of data on the internet which also contains trash contents of bad influencers who recklessly violate the laws for views and fames. Consequently, teenagers who are not mature enough will try to imitate the actions of those influencers and commit crimes. Furthermore, the punishments for criminals that are under 18 is not strict enough. This can be led by the evidence that many younglings who commit serious crimes are only punished in terms of economics or labor hours, which are not enough to make those who commit crimes see the heaviness of their actions and promote the repeat in crimes activities among other teenagers.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be the promotion of propaganda of illegal activities in school. A number of consultation sessions should be held once a year to provide knowledge about the detrimental effects it causes and what the consequences if people go against the laws. Many countries have adopted this measure and it proved to be effective since the level of awareness among students has increased exponentially. A second measure is to increase the extermination of bad contents and promote the contents that are rich in knowledge. This action will help to decline the videos or articles with unfavorable content and prevent this type of unhealthy content from reaching young generations who can't select good information to learn.
In conclusion, the upward trend in the number of young criminals can be traced back to the easy access to the internet as well as the inadequate punishment, and steps need to be taken in widening the knowledge of students and the eliminating bad contents to tackle this problem.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roved to be effective since the level of awareness among students has increased e...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ent from reaching young generations who cant select good information to learn. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81459489882 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.951284636 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169566442493 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514616998961 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046489659936 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102638772963 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234982579365 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roved to be effective since the level of awareness among students has increased e...
^^
Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ent from reaching young generations who cant select good information to learn. In c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81459489882 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.951284636 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169566442493 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514616998961 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046489659936 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102638772963 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234982579365 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.