Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the best option to educate children is home schooling. Critics, however, believe that taking part in classes in an educational institution is crucial to youngsters' growth. While studying at home is beneficial in some cases, I am convicted that it is better to participate in school.
On the one hand, many people justify home-teaching due to enhanced mental ability empowered by greater level of interaction between instructors and students. Unlike typical classrooms having one teacher caring for 10-20 kids, home-schooled children are the only pupils in their class. Therefore, they gain exclusive access to the teacher, in other words, private tutors tend to be available at any time to clarify confusion points and to have long-hour discussions or debates regarding the lesson’s contents with these kids. As a result, not only youngsters' understanding of the problems become more profound, but when all their questions are fully addressed, they might also be encouraged ask for more insights and their curiosity is continually nurtured. This crave for knowledge often promotes children’s intellectual capacity, and therefore, they might grow up being more intelligent.
On the other hand, the prominent upside of being surrounded by classmates is the opportunity for young kids to develop and improve social skill sets. A school could be regarded as a miniature society, in which there are people from all walks of life. To integrate in this community, children usually have to learn interpersonal skills and team-work skills. For instance, they must find ways to collaborate with peers having widely divergent personality traits to finish a team project, to behave diplomatically so that their own individual rights are not violated and their friends’ are satisfied as well, or to manage misunderstandings to maintain relationships. Due to children spending a large part of the day at school, these social situations are faced and dealt with on a regular basis, which results in more experience gained in social problem-solving compared to studying with only private tutors.
In my opinion, joining classes is more advantageous for the development of youngsters. Social skills tend not to be acquired by home-schooling, in other terms, kids are deprived of the chance to interact and manage relationships with other children at the same age. However, despite limited availability of an instructor to answer their questions at any given point, children going to school can still do research by themselves and discuss lessons with their parents or friends, therefore, these pupils could have both enhanced mental faculties and social experience.
To conclude, although there are certain benefits to teaching children at home, my standpoint is that it is essential for youngsters to participate in classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43665158371 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06347624001 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572398190045 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1560495742 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.352941176 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30450312596 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997360869683 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052695301158 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181568313614 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328566079682 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.