Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Homeschooling, to some people, seems to have more benefits than traditional schooling in terms of children's growth. Others, however, believe in the importance of participating in school. Personally, although both views have their own merits and demerits, I think that school is still a better place to learn about the world.
On the one hand, home education could have its pros. Obviously, a child would not have to suffer from bullying or social anxiety as there are no other learners. Secondly, thanks to the deeper understanding of most parents about their children, a kid studying at home might have a more individualized curriculum. However, homeschooling could have its disadvantaged when a child nearly loses peer connection and communication, which is extremely crucial for its linguistic, mental and intellectual development. Moreover, a lack of social skills could also affect a child greatly when he joins the job market later because he didn't have the chance to practice working in a team, giving presentations, debating, etc.
On the other hand, although school could have some demerits which are also the merits of homeschooling, overall, it seems to me that it is still better than homeschooling due to various reasons. The first benefit is that an environment with lots of students would enhance many social skills like communication skills and team-working skills that can benefit the child in the long term. Furthermore, a child would be taught in a systematic way with well-accepted teaching methods. Therefore, a child would be equipped with adequate knowledge and skills to enter the job market or pursue higher education. For instance, due to the "active citizens" programme of the British Council, many students all over the world now have essential skills and perception to actively contribute to their community.
In conclusion, even though there are drawbacks and benefits to both homeschooling and traditional schooling, I still prefer going to school as I believe that it would be better for a child's development in the long run.
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- ielts writing task 1 26 02 2022 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Line 3, column 713, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am, giving presentations, debating, etc. On the other hand, although school could...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31306990881 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11961623158 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7443294176 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202667515269 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712911072652 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456162930908 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137983804674 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474695028975 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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