Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion
It is a common belief that the best way for a child's development is to teach them at home. However, there is a more persuasive argument that going to school is more crucial because doing so can help them build good social bonds and have a chance to get a good job in the future.
On the one hand, homeschooling encourages children to develop an interest in studying. Specifically, they can learn with more flexible schedules to make life easier. No rushing out of the house in the morning and having to meet all sorts of schedules. The children are also more directly involved in the learning process. Hence, there is little or no homework to be done. This results in greater interest in studying because homeschooled children can avoid stress as they get one-on -one tutoring or learn with their parents.
Nevertheless, going to school is a better way for children to develop. Attending school allows them to socialize. The children get more chances to meet new children of their age. If they stay at home all day. they will probably not be able to meet their friends at the same age. Meeting new people and socializing also broadens the knowledge. Thus, going to school is the better way for the children to be more sociable. Furthermore, completing the school education helps children to enroll into a college more easily. College is highly significant to succeed and achieve your dreams. With higher education, you can get a good job and lead a better life.
To sum up, while it is apparent that teaching children at home is one way supporting the children's development, it is undeniable that it is more significant to allow children to go to school.
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- The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 61
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...heir age. If they stay at home all day. they will probably not be able to meet their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74394463668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68194886276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9987437812 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1578947368 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273357393549 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928350335051 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981282001244 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187949248231 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785616845669 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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