Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
In the current era of globalization, some people believe that meat, as well as fish, play indispensable roles for their diet on a daily basis. Nevertheless, I maintain that becoming a vegetarian should be given more stress on to meet the well-being requirements of their later life and the world as a whole. This essay is going to discuss some benefits of conservation animals on the ground and in the sea.
To begin with, in the 4.0 Industry, having healthy diets seem as key considerations for each individual, rather than eating whatever selections they want. In other words, keeping in shapes effectively can be deemed as a route to fulfillment in their emotional supports. For example, having nutritious eating-diets without fat elements can help people become more and more self-assured about their appearances. According to the Oxford survey, approximately 85% of teenagers, as well as adults, place more importance on vegetable dishes than on ones that conclude meat and fish. As a result, no need for fat can tackle some obesity problems.
On top of that, citizens nowadays have a high level of knowledge and expertise in environmental issues. Indeed, a well-funded education plays a foundation of basic information that helps inhabitants aware more of the natural balance of all creatures on the Earth. This lead to the motivation to pay a great deal of effort to make human beings and wild animals to co-exist. According to the True Life Club, around 75% of wealthy households donated a large sum of currency for some volunteer groups to take care of forests and wild animals.
To sum up, it is undeniable that the non-exist amount of meat and fish can contribute a decline in some risks of ones’ health and serious consequences on nature. I suggest that give more value in the healthy backgrounds of every natural creature on the Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98709677419 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93891327505 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2932987299 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253395100231 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744601128437 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626478221885 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140985879065 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807275305983 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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