Some people get into debt buying things they do not need and cannot afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
It is widely known that nowadays many people tend to be more consumptive in purchasing things they do not use and cannot settle, even worse end up with loans. This worldwide phenomenon has been occurred due to several major factors and I would propose some notions that can be considered to prevent it.
Today, modern technology leads some people to be more creative and subtle. In terms of marketing goods, those skills are possible to trigger people in producing fantastic advertisements which could create consumer’s new desires and needs. Following this, attractive ads in social media can also easily persuade people to buy the latest style, especially for people who always follow the trend, causing them to easily spend their money in something that actually unnecessary. Moreover, elite brands are status symbols for some people, they connect wealth and material possession with happiness and success. This extremely enriches the habit of consumptive society in taking loans to make temporary pleasure to themselves.
Following those reasons, there are several options that can be taken by them who have the willingness to prevent this massive global case. First, people should have a clear regulation on their debit cards. This should be supported by their banks and financial institutions which should set a credit limit to their customers, aligned with each individual income. In addition to this, instead of opening malls in the city, it is better for the government to focus on providing more public parks and playgrounds. Thus, widening entertainment options for people besides going to the shopping center.
To conclude, it is true that the debt problem is now common in our society. Some of the reasons that caused this problem are the product advertisements in social media and social prestige dogma of happy and successful people. Those further can be avoid by the clear regulation of debit card and addition of public entertainment facilities by the government.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...t problem is now common in our society. Some of the reasons that caused this problem are th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, moreover, so, thus, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69969606559 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4782297183 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334328133509 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968202986018 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415047226141 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189887194632 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290024235638 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...t problem is now common in our society. Some of the reasons that caused this problem are th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, moreover, so, thus, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69969606559 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4782297183 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334328133509 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968202986018 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415047226141 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189887194632 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290024235638 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.