Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
There are commonly several youngsters who have to borrow funds from everyone in order to pay for insignificant and unaffordable items, even though they do not tend to utilize them sooner or later. The causes and solutions to this tendency will be outlined in the following essay.
To begin with, the two visible factors that can blame consumerism which puts individuals into debt are the popular consumptive lifestyles and the parental pampered education. Firstly, observing friends purchasing various luxury products on Facebook, Instagram, or Tiktok,... the envious appears and urges them to owe the same objects so as to post on those applications. Hence, despite the fact that the financial budget is burned out, they are willing to waste money to satisfy their lust. what is more, this behavior has existed for a long duration, vitally in parents’ upbringing. The enhancement of the economy considerably affects the way parents teach their children about their own finances. Since parents recently respond to all children’s requirements instead of saving money for plausible articles, which makes children aware that they have to achieve all of their demands, by all means, many people are ended up with a serious problem of debts.
On the other hand, fortunately, there are numerous keys to this common question. First of all, they can create a budget planning, which involves what is necessary and what is not. The excessive finance should be saved in the bank account and eventually, their finances are not only incompatible but also gaining bank interest rates. Furthermore, changing parental education is also an effective method although it will take a long time. teaching young children about the importance of possession will help children consider everything before getting something new.
Overall, needing a loan to buy inconsequential stuff is a serious issue, notwithstanding, it can be tackled by the changes in the saving habits and the children's teaching ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teaching
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, first of all, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34076433121 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8529646472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65923566879 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2698893952 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224633843578 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627389920224 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059989593232 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123302332636 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112515071919 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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