Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There are differing opinions on the effectiveness of advertising in influencing consumer behavior. While some argue that advertising is highly successful in persuading us to make purchases, others contend that advertising has become so ubiquitous that we tend to overlook it. In my view, although some individuals may ignore advertisements, the influence of influencers and the pervasive nature of advertising still compel people to buy products.
In today's consumer-driven society, an abundance of products is indirectly and directly marketed to the general public through influential figures. People are constantly exposed to images of celebrities and social media stars living glamorous lifestyles. Through clever advertisements and the portrayal of an aspirational standard of living, consumers are led to believe that their own success is only attainable through the acquisition of luxury goods. This phenomenon can be observed in both developed and underdeveloped countries like Nepal and India, where brands are often endorsed by popular celebrities. The association of these celebrities with the products not only increases viewership of the advertisements but also influences consumers to make purchases due to the strong fan following. Therefore, advertising strategies and campaigns that employ such tactics effectively attract people to engage with and purchase these products.
It is undeniable that advertisements have become omnipresent in our lives, with every smart device utilizing various methods to promote products. Social media platforms, websites, blogs, video sites, and news portals are saturated with promotional content, leading people to find ways to ignore them, such as using ad-blocking extensions or simply diverting their attention elsewhere. Even on digital billboards, people pay less attention, and when commercials are aired on television, individuals often multitask and focus on other chores.
In conclusion, while it is true that some individuals may disregard advertisements, the allure of a luxurious lifestyle and the manipulative nature of advertising continue to exert a strong influence on consumers. Despite attempts to avoid or ignore advertisements, other factors ultimately compel individuals to make purchasing decisions at various stages of their lives.
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- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...indirectly and directly marketed to the general public through influential figures. People are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95795795796 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29602802441 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6113760619 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.714285714 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261929813593 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833288496571 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638942081978 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152744579856 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899535156119 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.