Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Educating children in a single sex school is considered to be advantageous by some, whereas others believe education from bilingual sex is greater. I believe, school with the same gender might help to focus, but practically mixed school is more beneficial.

Schools equipped with single sex environment does help to focus in the education since they do not have any other sex as a distraction. Schools are bound with the main goals and the environment is mostly strict as there is just one gender to focus on. Not only this with the same sex students are more involved in active participation due to the fact that there will not be hesitation while studying. For instance, in the past education was limited to higher class, and they had some reputation to uphold, thus single sex was prioritized and it had remarkable results. With this influence single sex education thrived, filled with enthusiastic learners focused to uplift their education.

On the other hand, schools with mixed sex is also full of advantages, and the most important one will be boosting confidence among two sex, leading students to do better in interactive activities as well as their education.They are attracted to opposite gender and the aim always will be to impress the opposite sex with the talent. Moreover, this attraction will have the sense of competition which will encourage students to be a step ahead in almost every field possible. This as a result, help to form more engaging education filled with competition, thus better education. Also, they get filled with the opportunity to learn more from opposite sex as they have different ways to think and process knowledge they possess. Therefore, more interactive and practical learning is possible with this school type.

To conclude, single sex school does have attentive environment lacking distractions, however, I believe schools with both sex has more engaging and competitive education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17834394904 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82720766278 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5653935822 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157974549579 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767058693484 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544366319626 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14078175627 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642094961351 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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