Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both points of view and give you own point of view.
The health improvement for public has been a conservative issue with strong opinions between the increase of sports facilities or other methods. This essay will now examine both sides of the argument and present a final conclusion.
Those in favour of using equipment argue that it is convenient for them to access these items and that they are more motivated to exercise without going to a gym or enrolling in a course, especially the ones who are busy with daily work. In Vietnamese cities, for example, various spaces within communities, such as large gardens or public yards are requisitioned by the local authorities to install sports facilities. Hence, the people the people who live nearby will congregate there to do exercises while talking or chatting, primarily at dawn and twilight.
On the other hand, there are those that argue that even these tools are available, there will be no use if a person does not actively seek to improve his or her personal condition, so that solutions must begin from the root of the problem. Initially, we should enhance the awareness among citizens by organizing conservations related to community health with means of catalogues, videos, slides or summerised surveys. Another way to approach individuals is to open local yoga classes or make it more accessible to any class of the society, therefore, they can join the crowd with affordable budget.
Considering both points of view, it appears that a compromise may be the best solution. Sports facilities should be promoted more widely then people can make the most of their limited time, while the numbers and research should also be prioritized in order to form long-term common sense among all ages of the population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the people'.
Suggestion: the people
...es to install sports facilities. Hence, the people the people who live nearby will congregate there t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07746478873 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73452617579 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651408450704 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.785128056 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179735821605 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683645075054 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690883551139 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111481250697 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726395345811 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.