Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is assumed that folks should organize spare time activities for children; meanwhile, others believe that selection should be given to children. Both these schools of thought hold valid arguments. From my perspective, I truly agree with the second viewpoint. This essay will take both sides into consideration and make my personal assumption.
On the one hand, it is tangible that planned activities will benefit children in numerous factors. Initially, parents know their children’s personality and ability, so they can organize activities that are suitable to cultivate their children’s flair and assist them to accumulate knowledge and experience. For example, organized team sports such as basketball or football can give children aspirations to attain their goals as they are highly competitive sports. Besides, parents can be the supervisor when playing so it will be less dangerous than letting children play alone.
On the other hand, self-development is indispensable for children so it will be better if they can engage in activities on their own. This is derived from the fact that choosing activities to do in leisure time provides children with the opportunity to discover their inner soul in order to gain a deeper understanding of themselves. As a result, they can figure out their talents and interests, which makes the act of shaping their future become easier. Besides, doing things on their own means they have to take responsibility and challenge themselves so they will be physically and mentally stronger. This will serve as a deterrent to their giving up when confronting obstacles.
In conclusion, although parental guidelines are imperative, children should be given the opportunity to spend their free time in their own ways because of the numerous benefits I have listed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38732394366 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99305716488 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.004633267 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383259044241 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125221459 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972999208368 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240008499874 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233440609077 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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