Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
“Technology is a useful survant but a dangerous master”. Technology roled our life within our generation .Also it helps to deal with various tools to boost development and exchange information through its fields.This essay will discuss how technology make our life easier and facilitate our missions,Furthermore types of modern technology.
Modern technology turn our life into heaven.To clarify, people use every single thing with technology. They feel relax and comfortable when they use different kinds of technology.In addition,all new technology save money,effort, improves efficiency of business, communicate more easily,spend our time. Technology not only helps us in business but also people and government use it as a way of teaching.For example,Quantum Computing;it is a form of computing that takes advantage of quantum phenomena like superposition ,also it is Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning,Genomics,Internet of Things (IoT) and Computing Power.
The list of new technology grows everyday which is differing in historical invention and application.To clarify,the word "technology" brings to mind various devices,internet,data or advancements in the world of engineering.all of these different types serve different purposes.For example,mechanical, medical, communications, electronic,industrial and manufacturing and teaching technologies which is to learn just few years back. Animations, 3-D models, Augmented reality are all contributing for making an advanced and practical learning environment .
To conclude,Technology has impact on every sphere of human lifeand make it more luxurious.It had changed us in a possitve way by using modern ways. It has given rise to a civilization that is smart, connected and free .As far as i am concerned,technology facilities our life,change human mentality,socialy and emotionally,as a result we have to improve it and find new ways to generate more and more of modern technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05734767025 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32186538524 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.012451439 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.777777778 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142618078754 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068479146307 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040693858059 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854899916061 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371281827946 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.46 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.